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结果部分
对一篇医学SCI论文来说，除了创新性和意义，最重要的就是展现论文的结果了。而针对不同的统计方法，结果描述也有所不同。如果您还只停留在一种句式，那样不仅会使文章显得死板，还会显得我们的英语非常匮乏。这里跟大家总结一下针对不同医学统计方法如何生动的描述结果。
首先，对于显著性差异分析：
1）如果差异显著，可以这样描述：
a, …is higher/lower/increase/decrease…in/by/withor after the administration ofA than/compared with B；
b, Significantlyincreased/decreased…was observed in A compared with B。
c, significant differencesin…were observed/witnessed between A and B；
d, Enhanced/Decreased…inresponse to A/B was observed…;
e, A showedsignificant/better effect on …than/compared with B;
f, Asignificantly decreased/increase/improve …。
2）如果差异有趋势，可以这样描述：
a, A similartrend was observed in…;
b, A compared toC additionally trended to…；
c, …tend to…in Acompared with B；
d, A tendencytowards higher/lower…was seen in…。
3）如果差异不显著或结果类似，可以这样描述：
a, No impact ofA/B/(A and B) on…was demonstrated in the presented experiment；
b, No effect on…occurredwith or after the administration of A/B/(A and B)；
c, No differencein…was observed/witnessed between A and B；
d, There was nodifference in…；
e, …in A and Bdid not differ；
f, …was notsignificantly altered by …-treatment…；
g, …was similarin all (between) groups and ranged from …to…。
4）如果两因素之间存在相互关系，比如干预和时间效应，可以这样描述：
a, A treatment ×period interaction/An interaction of treatment × week wasobserved for…as…（描述指标随时间变化）；
b, There was an interactionof treatment × time for…。
另外，在描述结果时，可以尽量将两个相关的结果写在一句话中，用关联词链接，既可以使上下文衔接紧密，又可避免流水账式写法。如：
a, …in A and Bdid not differ, but … tended to be higher/lower with/in A/B；
b, …remained at arelatively low level, although a trend was observed for theincrease/decreasein A/B in comparison with B/A；
c, A/B were not foundto affect/have no effect on…, but tendency to…was observedin B/A；
d, Despite/Inspite of no effect on…, A/B significantly increased/improved…；
e, Similartendencies, albeit not confirmed statistically/although notstatisticallysignificant, were observed in the remaining groups in whichpatients were…；
f, A negativeeffect of…on…and a positive effect on…were observed。
第二，在描述相关性分析时，可以用：
a, …is verynegative significant correlated with …；
b, There is asignificant negative correlation between…and…；
c, Rises in…paralleledincrease in…；
d, …revealed asignificant correlation with…；
e, There was aninteraction between…and…。
第三，对生存分析的结果描述：
a, Survival curvesaccording to Kaplan-Meier showed: 1. Survival at…years is…%,with 95% CIbetween…and... ; 2. Survival estimate is…% at ... years；
b, Theoverall…-, …- and …-year survival rates of…were…%, …% and…%,respectively;
c, The overallsurvival rates of…were calculated by the Kaplan-Meier, with…%, …%and…% at…, …and… years, respectively；
d, The survivorshipanalysis (Kaplan-Meier) showed a…% survival of…after…years.
第四，针对诊断方法的灵敏度分析：
a, ROC analysis of …..determined that the cut-off valueof…yielded a sensitivityof…%, specificity of …%, … of …%, and…of…%；
b, A cut-off value of…resulted in a sensitivity,specificity, …and…of…%,…%,…%and…%, respectively。
医学SCI论文写作常用句式——引言部分
引言部分其中一个重要功能就是说明本文的重要性，阐述本文的创新性及意义。我们可以用However 等转折关联词来引导前人研究的不足，提出一种新方法或新方向。如：
However, little information/attention/work/data/research…(or fewstudies/investigations/researchers/attempts…) (or no/none of these studies) has(have) been done on/focused on/attempted to/conducted/investigated/studied(with respect to)…。
Previous research/studies/records has/have failed toconsider/ignored/misinterpreted/neglectedto/overestimated/underestimated/misleaded….Thus, these previous results areinconclisive/misleading/unsatisfactory/questionable/controversial.
Their studies may be more reasonable if they had…consideredthis situation.
Their results could be better convinced if they…
Their conclusion may remain some uncertainties。
当研究方法和方向与前人一样时，可通过以下方式强调自己工作：
However, data is still scarce/rare/less accurate, we needto/aim to/have toprovide more documents/data/records/studies/increase thedataset. Furtherstudies are still necessary/essential…。
In the current study we tested the hypothesis that a policyof active management of nulliparous labour would: 1. reducethe rate of caesarean section, 2. reduce the rate of prolongedlabour; 3. not influence maternal satisfaction with the birth experience。
This study aim to/This paper reports on/This paper provides results/Thispaperextends the method/This paper focus on…；
The purpose of this paper is to…；
Furthermore/Moreover/In addition, we will also discuss…。
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